Dragon Love
By Robin Carpenter of
Salem's
Creations Blog
In the beginning, there was man who
ruled the land, and dragons that ruled the sky. A pact between Kings
was made. Each village of man would offer the fairest maiden to the
dragons and upon her skin would be placed a magical jeweled amulet.
Several amulets were made and distributed across the countryside. In
return for each maiden, the dragons would insure safety for the
village.
King Wynn,
the leader of the dragons enjoyed a time of luxury, though the
peasants thought the dragons ate the human women, the dragons needed
young maidens to mate. There were no female dragons. And so each time
a woman wore a jeweled amulet, she invited the dragons to take her to
their bed.
Then the humans grew bold, and refused
to allow their daughters to wear the amulets. King Wynn,
seeing that his fellow dragons were in despair from having no mates,
decided to order his people to hibernate. They wait for the amulets
to once again be worm by maidens.
Chapter One
Present Day: One week before All
Hallow's Eve
“Maggie, would you look after the
shop today? I have some errands to run. Since its Sunday most people
won't be shopping so it should be a slow day. Just don't get into the
storage. I have some things there I don't wish to sell.” Ethan
said.
“Sure Uncle Ethan. I don't mind
looking after your store. I love to see all the interesting stuff you
have. They are so old! Your antiquities store always feels like home
to me. My degree in anthropology is really going to rock!”
Ethan smiled, “Your always welcome
Maggie. Now remember what I said, no going into the storage area.”
He said as he left the store by the back door.
Maggie looked around her uncles store.
It is packed full of old merchandise. Though the store is cluttered,
her uncle has a system. In one corner, he has his “contemporary”
pieces. In reality everything is at least 30 years old. Far older
than herself. Some of those items were her mothers when she was a
child.
Then there is the older corner. Things
that are 100 to 200 years old. These are wonderful to look at and
really stir the imagination of how life was like back then.
But what Maggie really likes, is what
Uncle Ethan calls the ancient space. These items are so old
she can't even identify what some things are for.
Though Ethan forbade it, Maggie
explores the stock rooms. Here, the merchandise is organized just
like the sale room. Maggie skips the contemporary and older items and
goes straight for the ancient corner. Several boxes and crates are
lined up. But she knows what she is looking for. As a girl, she use
to stare at them. It is four amulets with a solid gold chains. As a
child she would wear one as a crown and pretend she was a beautiful
princess waiting for her prince.
“What are you doing girl? Didn't I
tell you to not come back here!” Ethan shouted.
Maggie jumped, having not realized her
uncle had returned.
“Sorry Uncle. But isn't it lovely.
Don't you think I look like a real princess?”
Ethan smiled, “Yes you do. You look
just like your mother, God rest her soul.”
Maggie smiled, knowing that if her
uncle is thinking of her mother then he isn't too upset over her
breaking the rules.
“You know, my birthday is tomorrow.”
Ethan smiled, suspecting what might
come next he said, “Yes I know. You'll be 18, and heading off to
college.”
“It would be a wonderful birthday
present if I could have these 4 amulets. They are so beautiful. I
love the emerald one, and the sapphire, onyx and opal ones too.
Please can I have them?” Maggie pleaded.
“Well, I don't know, they are very
old. If you wore them they could break.” Ethan said, shaking his
head.
“They look sturdy enough. You have
them in the ancient corner, but they look brand new!” Maggie
exclaimed.
“True, I was told they are old but
no one could tell me how old. Which is why I never placed them on the
sale floor. They may very well be newer than originally thought,
though the stones are definitely real. I suppose, I can give them to
you, on one condition.” Ethan said, raising his index finger to
emphasis his condition.
“Whats the condition?” Maggie
asked.
“That you don't wear them till you
are married. I heard a story about them, and I don't know if its
true.” Ethan said.
“What story Uncle?”
“That if a young maiden wore the
amulet, she would be stolen away from her village and killed.”
Ethan whispered, adding to the effect of mystery.
“Oh that is a superstition. You
can't actually believe that!” Maggie said giggling.
“Even myth has some truth girl. But,
I suppose you are right. Take them, but remember the rule. Not until
your married.” Ethan warned.
Maggie rolled her eyes, but dutifully
said, “Yes Uncle.”
“Now you'd better get going. You are
suppose to be at your college dorm tomorrow. Your going to make a
wonderful historian.” Ethan said, hugging his niece in a big bear
hug.
“I hope so. I can't wait to show my
friends these amulets.” Maggie kissed Ethan’s cheek, gave him a
hug in return, and left the store.
Chapter Two: A few days later: College
.
“Maggie...Maggie...Wait up!” Ira
said.
“Hi Ira, did you find your dorm room
and your classes?” Maggie grabbed the papers Ira was handing to her
that showed information on classes and one flyer about the party.
“Yeah, I think we share a few
classes. English I and History. I'm sharing my dorm room with
Jordane. Did you hear about the party this Saturday? You have to go.
Of course Abbie and Jordane already said they'd come.” Ira said.
“Yes I'll go, and I have a surprise
for everyone. I'll show you before the party. Tell everyone to meet
me at the dorm just before we go to the party OK?” Maggie said.
“OH I can't wait its going to be so much fun!” Ira said excitedly.
Saturday:
“Abbie, Ira, Jordane, come on in.
I've got a surprise for everyone. Oh look, your dresses will go
perfectly!” Maggie clapped her hands in excitement.
“So whats this surprise Maggie? Ira
has been going on and on about it and no one could say what it is.”
Abbie said.
Maggie went to her table and picked up
a wooden box with an intricate carving of 4 dragons on it. She
turned, and opened the box.
“These are from my Uncles store. The
emerald is mine, it goes perfectly with my baby blue skirt.” Maggie
said.
“Well I am going with the Sapphire.
My favorite color is blue, and it goes lovely with my creamy yellow
mini.” Ira said.
“The Opal is mine, its my
birthstone.” Abbie said.
“That leaves the Onyx for you
Jordane. It contrasts lovely with your red outfit.” Maggie said.
“Oh thank you Maggie. These are so
beautiful! Ira said.
“OK girls, now that we have that
done, let's go!”
Chapter 3: The Party
“This party sucks. Most of the
people here are girls. The few guys that are here aren't worth
looking at.” Jordane said.
“Well its early and more people are
arriving as we speak. Look at the guy walking in the door. Isn't he
a hunk! He must be a football player. I always go after the jocks.”
Maggie said.
“Yeah, oh look, his girlfriend is
just behind him following like a good little woman.” Ira said.
“So Maggie gave a bad example, but
she is right, there are more people showing up. And I think I see my
ex-boyfriend, so excuse me.” Abbie said as she walked toward the
patio door.
“Abbie wait for me, I just noticed
they have a hot tub.” Jordane said.
“But you don't have a swim suit on
Jordane. Maggie said, following the girls.
“Who needs a swim suit? Live a
little Maggie. You did wear your best lingerie right?” Jordane said
over her shoulder.
“Wait for me too, it's better than
standing here staring at the front door.” Ira said.
So they went outside to mingle with
other guests. Abbie broke away from the group to talk to her
ex-boyfriend. While Maggie, Ira, and Jordane joined two guys in the
hot tub. Maggie kept her skirt on, but took her blouse off to show
her baby blue camisole tank.
“Hi, I'm Maggie, mind if we join you
boys?” Maggie said. The boys murmured their appreciation for the
company.
Abbie watched her friends pair off
with other men, and then turned to Scott, and worried that he was
drinking again. From the looks of things, he was also doing steroids
again. Which had been the reason she broke off the relationship.
Abbie took the bottle of beer out of
Scott's hand, “You know you shouldn't be drinking this. You're
already on probation. If you get caught doing drugs and drinking
alcohol you're going to jail. Last time you didn't because you're
under age. You're 18 now, they don't give second chances Scott.”
“Yeah what do you care? Last time we
talked you said you couldn't stand me anymore. So why you bitch-in'
at me now?” Scott said with a scowl.
Abbie crossed her arms, “I do care
Scott. I just don't care to be the druggies girlfriend.” she said.
“Well then do me a favor babe, stop
caring.” Scott said as he laughed and walked away.
Abbie shook her head as she watched
the only guy she ever loved walk away. Maybe he was right. At one
time Scott had been a fun-loving guy who was sweet and romantic. She
had instantly fallen for his charm. The summer just before junior
year of high school had been best. Their families had vacationed
together at a beach getaway. Just two cabins, a sandy beach and love.
It was the perfect summer. Unfortunately that school year had been
rough. Scott lost his parents in a plane crash that fall. He
struggled in school and in football. So he had turned to drinking and
drugs. Since then, there just hadn't been a future for them.
Abbie turned to join her other
friends. She was here to have a good time, and good times didn't
involve trying to save someone who didn't want to be saved.
Chapter four: There be Dragons
“Hey Abbie, are you OK? I saw you
arguing with Scott.” Maggie said.
“Yeah Abbie, come on, I think you
could use some cheering up. Why don't we blow this party and go to
that diner a couple blocks away. We can walk, it'll be fun. And you
can have all the ice cream sundaes you can eat.” Ira said.
“Sounds good. I'm just really bummed guys. I thought I was over him! Whats wrong with me. Maybe I
shouldn't have given up on him.” Abbie said, starting to cry a
little over the lost love she knew she'd never get back.
“Honey he made his own choices. You
can't save him, only he can do that. You tried, there's nothing more
for you to do but pray he comes around without killing himself.”
Jordane said.
“Look, the moon is so full tonight.
Enjoy the moment Abbie, everything’s going to be OK.” Maggie
said.
“Yeah your right. The moon is
pretty. What is that in the distance though?” Ira said.
“I don't know, its like a big blob.
But it's getting closer. Do you think it could be a shooting star or
something?” Maggie said.
“Uh, guys, I don't think that’s
it. It looks like it has wings! And its too big to be a bird.”
Jordane said.
Maggie grabbed Ira's arm and ducked
behind a bush, the others following.
“We can't all fit back here. Why are
we hiding anyway? This is silly.” Abbie said.
“I'd rather be silly and safe than
brave and stupid.” Jordane said.
“Definitely not safe! Look! It's a
...Dragon! That can't be! But look. They've got wings and scales and
their huge!” Ira screamed.
“I say we run for the diner. It's
just around that corner. It's so close!” Abbie pointed toward the
end of the street.
Maggie grabbed Abbie and Ira's hands,
“OK stick together. Lets go quickly.” Maggie said.
The girls ran toward the diner. Inside
had to be safe. Looking up, Jordane said, “DUCK!”
It was too late, Jordane was picked up
by a huge black dragon. Abbie, Ira and Maggie were also flung in the air and caught by the dragons. Maggie was flung onto the dragons
back. Abbie was cradled in the dragons arms and Ira was hanging
upside down by her foot secured in the dragons claws.
“Maggie help me!” Ira said.
“Don't move Ira! Holy shit, is that
the college? Were flying over the dorms! Don't move or they might
drop us!” Maggie warned.
“Yes, don't move little ones. We've
got you.” The smallest dragon said.
“Holy Shit! It talked!” Jordane
exclaimed.
“Do you think I could at least be
held upright? All the blood is rushing to my head!” Ira said.
“If you don't panic, I will move you
to my back.” Ira's dragon said.
“I don't think I can panic much more
than I already am!” Ira screamed as she was flung on the dragons
back.
The next few hours Maggie and her
friends worried as houses, state buildings and eventually the ocean
was spotted. Each woman asked the dragons many questions but none
were answered. It seemed after those first few times of speaking,
they preferred to remain silent. One thing became clear, they were
not in America anymore. The best they could guess, is that they are
somewhere in the United Kingdom. But where exactly they couldn’t
determine.
Chapter Five: The Agreement
Each dragon took their mate to their
bed. The women were exhausted from the long journey and the shock of
flying through the air. Each dragon had kept his mate as warm as he
could on the ride, but it had just been warm enough for survival.
Each woman would need time. Though in their home, it wouldn't be
long before the women felt the oppressive heat from the magma deep in
the volcano. Dragons liked the heat. Staying above ground for too
long made them sluggish. Except for Tyne, he is the only water dragon
left and is right at home in any river, lake or ocean or hot magma
flow. However Wynn, the King of the dragons, had to keep Tyne below
the surface most of the time. The last time Tyne got out of the nest
he was spotted in a lake and dubbed Nessie by
the locals.
Wynn’s mate stirred. “Good evening
mate. What is your name?”
“Where am I?” Maggie said. She had
already resigned herself hours ago that she wasn't dreaming and
talking dragons were real. She looked at the dragon that had carried
her away. His skin, or rather scales, are a bright luminescent green.
She knew from studying world cultures that he is an Oriental dragon,
with a slender snake-like body and four feet with huge claws. He is
now curled in the corner watching her. His head is swaying
slightly like a snakes, and his horns are bright red.
“You are in my home. We are
underground in our lair. Please, tell me your name beautiful one.”
Wynn said.
“I'm Maggie, who are you? And where
underground are we? And is that lava? It's so hot in here. Isn't it
dangerous to live so close. The heat is so oppressive.”
“You will get use to the heat. Us
dragons need it. Yes that is lava. Do not go near it and you will
not be harmed. The volcano is not very active. I am Wynn, King of the
dragons. And you, are my mate. When you put that emerald amulet on,
as your friends put the other amulets on, you signaled us that you
were ready to mate.” Wynn said, shifting his tail to settle into
the corner to put her at ease.
“Ready to mate? Right. I did no such
thing! I mean, I put on the necklace, but it's just a necklace! How
can it “signal” anything?”
“Its a magical amulet. It was
crafted by King Cunorix's wizard many centuries ago. We made a pact.
Whomever wore the amulet would become a dragons mate. However when
his own daughter received a dragons amulet, he refused to allow his
daughter to leave his side. He made war on our kind by sending out
dragon slayers. He made rumors that we ate virgins and so the people
became fearful of us. War was waged. We fought, but they were many
and us so few. We are the last four of our kind. I ordered everyone
to hibernate until the world changed, and so it has. My hope is that
our kind may flourish once again. Starting, with mates.” Wynn
looked at his mate, noticing her lithe body and bright blue eyes.
“I've heard all the stories about
dragons. You eat sacrifices. Usually the sacrifice is a virgin woman,
or goats. If you don't eat people, what do you eat?”
Wynn laughed, “Ah, well. I do eat
goats. But young women have never been on the menu. Would you like to
come closer? You may touch my scales if you wish. My body is yours.”
“No thank you. I want to go home.
Where are my friends? I have no wish to be your mate.”
Maggie said as she stood from the bed and crossed her arms in
protest.
“I am sorry to displease you Maggie,
but you and your friends are not going anywhere. Sit, your friends
are safe and will join you shortly.” Wynn ordered.
“So I am a prisoner? That is not how
you do things in this time. You said you are from an ancient time.
How that is I do not know. Are you immortal? Whatever, if I accept
I'm speaking to a dragon then I accept you are as old as you say. But
I am not property, you cannot just claim me. This amulet is not a
marriage contract. I am most definitely not your mate!” Maggie
said, raising her voice and tapping her foot to emphasis the point.
“Sit down Maggie, no you are not a
prisoner. Though I ask that you stay and get to know me. There is
much to learn. All I ask is that you keep an open mind.” Wynn said.
“Fine, but I want to see my friends
now.” Maggie said, not obeying his order to sit down.
Wynn sighed and said, “Very well,
follow me.”
Wynn lead Maggie to a commons area.
The room was cut out of solid limestone rock with a circular and very
smooth ceiling. In the center sat her friends on an old primitive
bench that is little more than a log. Maggie ran to her friends and
hugged each one.
“Oh Abbie, Ira, Jordane, I'm so
happy to see you are all right!” Maggie said, relieved.
“Tyne said I am his mate. He's the
big blue one over there.” Ira said pointing to the corner where the
blue dragon sat. “Maggie where the hell did you find those Amulets?
Did you know what they are? How the hell are we getting out of here?”
Ira said.
“Oh Ira I'm sure Maggie didn't know
what the amulets really are. And when I talked with Lyre he seemed
really sweet. Lyre is the smallest dragon. And I love that his scales
are a pearl white. He played a lute for me and made up a song just
for me.” Abbie said.
“Well Cynehelm is the big black
brute. And I agree with Abbie, we need to make a plan to get out of
here.” Jordane said.
“ENOUGH” Cynehelm said. “You are
my mate, and none of you will go anywhere. The pact was made when you
wore the amulets.”
“Go easy Cyne, that pact was made
long ago.” Lyre said.
“We didn't make a pact. Our
ancestors did. You cannot hold us to that. And why don't your kind
have female dragons you can mate to?” Jordane asked.
“Dragons do not produce female
offspring. We would have died out long ago were it not for the pact.”
Wynn said.
“Perhaps there is a reason for
that.” Ira said under her breath.
“Mates, we are a simple breed. We
protect humans and in return all we ask is to have one mate for life.
Our race will not live without you. We cannot take another mate. The
amulets bind us to the one mate that is right for us. If you walk
away, we shall never take another. It is your decision. We will leave
you now. I've provided food and water for you all. We will be back in
a few hours for your decisions.” Wynn said.
“So what do we do?” Ira said as
she walked to the buffet table to get water and a sandwich.
“I say we grab all the food and
water we can carry and hike out of here.” Jordane said, following
Ira and grabbing several biscuits.
“I know its scary, but Jordane your
studying to become a historian. Think of what these dragons could
teach you that no classroom is ever going to be able to compare to.
Ira, same for you. Your Anthropology classes are only going to teach
so much. What better way to learn than from these dragons who have
been there and lived in an ancient society?” Maggie said.
“That's true. But Maggie do you
realize what you're saying? It could all be a big lie. What if they do
eat us? Mythology is normally based in some fact, however stretched
the truth may be.” Jordane said.
“Well I think the dragons are sweet.
And I loved the song Lyre played for me. I think I'm going to accept.
I mean, what harm does it do to stick around for a while? We can learn
more and if we don't like them, leave. They said we are not
prisoners. It's completely reasonable to concede to their request to
learn about them and then decide.” Abbie said.
“Fine Maggie, if Jordane is with me,
I'll stay. But at the first sign of danger were out of here with or
without you and Abbie.” Ira said, looking for Jordane for
confirmation that she was on board with the plan. Jordane nodded her
agreement.
Chapter 6: Dragon Love
“So you have agreed to stay with us
mate?” Wynn said. The dragons had returned a short while later.
Lyre brought another instrument to play for Abbie, this time a flute
that looked very old and sounded beautiful. Once again each dragon
took his mate to their sleeping quarters.
“Maggie, are you afraid of me? There
is no need to be.” Wynn said as he once again took his place in
the corner. Maggie didn't feel comfortable sitting on the giant
double king sized bed, so she stood at the opposite side of the room.
“No I'm not afraid. You mentioned
that your kind do not birth females. How are humans and dragon to
mate?” Maggie said hesitantly.
“Come here, and you shall see.”
Wynn said in a low rumble.
Maggie struggled to control a nervous
shudder, but if she was going to commit to this course, she needed to
get a little closer. Maggie approached Wynn and felt his scales. It
was sort of a combination of a fishes scale and the skin of a
reptile. Hard and strong, yet smooth. His underbelly is lighter, but
more rough textured. Wynn reached slowly for Maggie and pulled her to
him so that her breasts pressed against is underbelly.
“You feel wonderful in my arms
Maggie. You are a very beautiful woman.” Wynn sighed.
Maggie blushed, she knew she had 10
extra pounds to loose, leftovers from being a fat kid in high school.
It had taken a good year in the gym to get to her current size.
Her breasts rubbed against the rough
texture of his skin, and the friction made her nipples peak. Maggie
found herself asking in a sultry voice, “How does a human and
dragon mate Wynn?”
Wynn whispered in her ear, “Take
your cloths off and find out.” Wynn let Maggie go as she obeyed his
request. She started to remove the amulet, but at his request she
kept it on, and nothing else. The sight Wynn was gifted with was
breathtaking. With bright blue eyes, a runners build, nice round
bottom and auburn hair that looked like fire in the right light, Wynn
was satisfied with his mate.
Once again in his arms, she moved a
sultry sway. He coiled his tail around her and pressed firmly into
her. Her hands roamed his body exploring every inch. Her favorite
part was just under his jaw. The skin there was smooth, almost like
human skin.
Wynn took his long slender tongue and
explored her body. Wrapping it around her breasts and feeling her
nipples. He was careful to hold her tenderly, his horns and claws are
like daggers, and one careless move could hurt her.
“Say you will stay with me Maggie.”
Wynn said, moving his tongue slowly down her body to explore her
curves.
“I still don't know how a human and
dragon can mate Wynn.” Maggie said, gasping as his tongue reached
her thighs.
Wynn pulled back slightly, exposing a
part of his underbelly she hadn't seen before. A portion of his skin
had folded away, exposing what she assumed was a penis. It was like
no human penis. He was very long, and too thick for her. Maggie
pulled away.
“This isn't going to work. Your too
big. I've seen movies with well endowed men. You are much bigger than
any world record. You would hurt me.” Maggie said, sounding almost
forlorn.
“Trust me mate, it will work.”
Wynn didn't give her time to worry. He wrapped himself around her,
using his body to move her to the bed. He began his ministrations
again, this time heightening her pleasure with his whole body. He
used his tail to spread her legs, and his tongue began its dance
across her skin, and to her sweet spot.
Maggie gasped, having never felt
anything quite like the sensations she was feeling before. She tried
to return the touch to him, but he shifted away. She was happy enough
to allow him to explore. All thoughts of stopping were lost. Pleasure
replaced common sense as she peeked and cried her pleasure.
Wynn waited for the right moment, and
let out his dragon fire, directing the blaze at the amulet.
Immediately the amulet melted into her skin and Maggie’s cry of
pleasure turned into screams of pain. She felt the white-hot heat of
flames and knew she was lost.
* * * *
Jordane heard the screams. She had just
begun to think sleeping with Cyne might be good fun college
experience. One she'd never tell another living soul, but fun all the
same. When she heard the screams she ran out of Cyne's room toward
Maggie and Wynn. Ira came racing out as they heard another scream.
“Abbie! Maggie! Ira help Abbie, I'll
try to save Maggie.” What she would do she didn't know. One thing
was certain, this was a trick, and something needed to be done.
Jordane raced into the room and saw
the horrific sight. Wynn was holding Maggie, but it was no longer
Maggie. Blood and hair the color of Maggie's were on the floor. Bones
are scattered throughout the horrific mess. The sight sickened
Jordane. Standing over Maggie's human body stood a white oriental
dragon being held in Wynn’s arms.
“Maggie? What has he done to you?”
Jordane said, beginning to cry for her friend now.
“Maggie has been reborn, as my mate.
Where is Cyne? Why are you not with him?” Wynn said.
“Jordane, its me. I don't know what
happened. But its me. I'm...I'm a dragon. Wynn how am I a dragon?”
Maggie said, a tone of hysteria taking over her voice.
“When our mates come to us, the
amulet is the key to the transformation. Mating is impossible without
it. I'm sorry, I couldn't tell you beforehand. But you will come to
love me, it is meant to be.” Wynn said.
“Yes, I feel a pull toward you. I'm
not mad at you Wynn. There is no way I would have agreed to this.”
Maggie said, inspecting her new-found body.
Jordane ran, stopping only to grab Ira
as she walked out of Abbie's room with a pale absent face.
“No time Ira, go into hysterics
tomorrow. Today, we run! There's no saving them.” Jordane said.
* * * *
Maggie inspected Abbie. She felt it
was Abbie. Her dragon body was slightly taller than her mates, but
still smaller than the rest of the males. Her scales are a mixture of
pale yellow and bright green wings.
“Oh Abbie, your beautiful.” Maggie
said.
“Do you think Ira and Jordane will
come back?” Abbie said, leaning into Lyre.
“I don't think so. Which means
Cynehelm and Tyne have no mates, right Wynn?”
“They have mates, Cyne and Tyne will
never give up hope. They have no choice now. The amulets will always
be connected to them. As long as their dragon mates are alive, so
shall they be.” Wynn said.
“You mean they are now immortal?”
Maggie asked.
“No, it is possible to die. It's just
not as easy as mortal death. When one dies, so does their mate. As
long as we both live, we do not die from disease or age.” Cynehelm
said.
“We will watch over them. One day,
they will come back.” Wynn vowed.
And so it was to be that the dragons
once again protected the land.
* * * *
One week Later
Ethan awoke with the phone ringing.
Looking at the clock he wondered who could be calling this late.
“Hello? Who is this?” Ethan
answered.
“Ethan? I need you.”
“Maggie is that you?” Ethan said.
“No, this is Jordane. I have
horrible news. Maggie is now a dragon, and the amulets you gave her
are responsible.” Jordane said.
Ethan thought back to the stories he
was told as a child.
“That girl never did listen. Where
are you? There is only one thing I know to do.” Ethan said.
“I'm in Scotland.” Jordane said.
“Time to visit The Dragon slayer.”
Ethan said.
The End.
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Love the intro... I'm intrigued. I want to know how the dragons and the maidens were able to mate--I'm assuming some shape-shifting was involved. I'v decided to read one part each day, so I'll be back tomorrow to read chapter one!
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ReplyDeleteSounds good and thanks. I know its a bit long so a chapter a day sounds perfect. :)
ReplyDeleteVery interesting concept and a wonderful way to pull Dragons into the 20th century. I am excited to see what happens next!
ReplyDeleteI read the whole thing in one sitting! Excellent story--really kept me wanting more!
ReplyDeleteThanks Craftymoose. :) Glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteSo I cheated... I read the whole thing. I was too curious about how dragons mated. Guess now I know... what a twist. I was not expecting that at all.
ReplyDeleteHaving the males transform into human form was my first plan, but thought it too obvious. So I changed it so the females would. :)
ReplyDeleteLove that you turned the girls into Dragons instead of the other way round. Wonderful story :D XXX
ReplyDeleteThanks Gina! :)
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing! You've put a lot of thought into this and I also like how you've brought dragons back to the modern day. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat a clever concept! Wonderful job!
ReplyDeleteWow, this is sooooooo cool! Now I'm going to be dreaming of dragons in a whole different way, yowza, chiwowza!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteWonderful modernising (& sexualising) of age old mythical creatures. The only break I had was to grab a coffee so I could savour the story as I sipped :) I wish this was a TV series, much better & more possibilities than the basic Sex in the City gals!!! GREAT TALE!!!!!! Congrats :)
ReplyDeleteLoved that the women were turned into Dragons! I'm anxious to read what happens next... Does the dragon slayer kill them all? Do the girls change their minds and become dragons to save their friends? Great write!!!
ReplyDeleteNo dragonslayer...nope...
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